21 April 2025

On Haiku

(Leaf 1) – Looking back.

Tsuchiya Koitsu - Ueno Shinobazu no ike (1930)


  

This was a short essay, titled ‘On Haiku’, which I originally wrote circa 2003. At the time I had been a regular contributor to ‘still’ – a very beautiful and professionally produced little magazine which described itself as “a journal of short verse.” Published in the UK, it was edited by ai li chia and ran from 1997 to 2001. I was (and continue to be) very proud of it and my small contributions to its pages. I was very young at the time, and reading some of my poems from that period, I can see I was still somewhat naively venturesome in my early efforts at haiku and short verse, but ai li was a wonderfully thoughtful and encouraging editor. I remain very grateful to her for that. It was always a real joy receiving ‘still’ through the post. Accompanied by elegant notes from ai li, always handwritten on thin tissue paper in black ink, with red hanko stamps. A lot of time, effort and love went into the creation of that little ‘zine’, as the small press poetry magazines were called in those days. I still have the full run of ‘still’ sitting proudly on my bookshelf, twenty volumes plus one anthology – cherished tomes standing alongside my books on and by Matsuo Bashō, R.H. Blyth, et al. They have followed me on many a house move in the UK, ultimately ending up here in Tokyo, next to a window with a wonderful view of Mount Fuji – something remarkable which, if anyone had foretold me back in those days, I’d never have believed might come to pass. If I were writing this essay now, I would no doubt write it very differently. But I think it’s best to leave it as it is, and simply post it here as a starting point, some three decades on, now in 2025. Looking back, in order to begin looking forwards. It’s been many years since I last shared any of my short verses in public. I am doing so now purely for the sake of my own amusement, but if it should happen to be of passing interest to others of like-mind and outlook, then I hope that’s a good thing.

 

 

 

 ON HAIKU (c.2003)

 

after rain -

shining green leaves,

the sound of birdsong.

 

 

You want to learn haiku? --------- Don’t. --------- You already know how.

The art of haiku is clear – it is innate, something which everyone possesses. Haiku is. You see haiku. You feel haiku. Because haiku is. And because haiku is – haiku isn’t so simple.

Although haiku looks short, it isn’t short. Haiku is concise. Although haiku looks quick, it isn’t quick. Haiku is mindful. As a form of verse haiku is centred upon brevity. Its virtue is to be pure and untrammelled. Haiku speaks. It says more by appealing to the innate virtue which resides in the heart of all living things. Haiku speaks of truth. Haiku works through honesty and clarity. Haiku is open.

There is a lot of discussion at the moment about haiku and its place in modern literature. Many people are reading haiku and many people are writing haiku. Today haiku is definitely an art form which is rapidly disseminating from its point of origin in Japanese literature. This is because the essence of haiku is universal. Haiku is nature. Haiku is mind. Haiku is a double reflection. The world as it is. The world as we feel it. Instance and response. Image and feeling. Haiku appeals because of its benevolence. To slam haiku (and certainly modern haiku does have its detractors) is to close one’s mind.

Haiku is freedom. --------- Or at least, that is how I feel it.

 

 

through mist and

ripples of cloud

- evening sun.