18 June 2025

Peace & Quiet

(Leaf 59) – Reflection

 

Franz von Defregger - Der Leser


Another stab, this time done solo (see Leaf 38), at writing a proper 5-7-5 senryu in Japanese. Not sure how well or if it even works, but the autobiographical sentiment is true enough and sums me up well.

 

 

長閑さや   目のつかれたる   本終わり

のどかさや   めのつかれたる   ほんおわり

Tranquillity | tired eyes | the end of the book

 

Which is meant to suggest something like:

 

Ah, peace and quiet!

– my eyes grown weary,

reaching the book’s final page.